The line this panel was attached to originally read: "All the while, a forgotten darkness closes in on the capitol as the darkness of impending war casts a shadow over the kingdom. " The newest revision reads: "...or the disease that was eating away at the people?" I needed to swing the focus back around from the 'big picture' of the kingdom to the suffering of the people of the kingdom instead.

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